Rather than reverse, the second one felt like it was inside out? Like how you undo your clothes after the wash? I don’t know if that makes sense but everything I read of yours just confirms you’re definitely a sorcerer of words and form! 🫶🏽
Damn! I just listened to a poet which swirlwind my mind in all directions like the movie memento, the pain is surreal at the same time. Your spell of "love's surrender" cuts me like a dozen pairs of keen knives guiding through my ribs. One thing is sure for me, I must surrender myself to your eloquent art as you're a master of it and love for your writing which is magnificent, remarkable and mesmerizing
Rather than reverse, the second one felt like it was inside out? Like how you undo your clothes after the wash? I don’t know if that makes sense but everything I read of yours just confirms you’re definitely a sorcerer of words and form! 🫶🏽
Aww that’s a much better description
I like the concept. Very creative. The writing...beautiful.
Aww thank you☺️
My favorite thing is reading your work at its most raw. This is it. 🖤
Thanks Elly🖤🖤
Cassie this felt like a quiet storm,soft but it hits deep.
The way it loops back? Damn
It’s like feeling everything twice first as love, then as memory this poem is beautiful and brutal at the same time
Thank you Hema! Im glad you took the time to read it and digest it
this is such a beautiful format omg
Awww thank you so much Hannah🖤
This reads like heartbreak folding into itself. Stunning.
Thanks Sae!
Gorgeous! This inspires me to play with form. Not sure I will manage this level of epic, though.
Thanks Autumn!
-Got me sobbing. This is just- BEAUTIFUL
😭😭 don’t sobbb
Thank you🥺
Beautiful. Full of awe.
Thank you, Thomas!!
this was so good. i love palindromic words but this was so thought provoking and so interesting to read. the reverse definitely.
Thanks for reading Gail! It was certainly challenging to write this one
Damn! I just listened to a poet which swirlwind my mind in all directions like the movie memento, the pain is surreal at the same time. Your spell of "love's surrender" cuts me like a dozen pairs of keen knives guiding through my ribs. One thing is sure for me, I must surrender myself to your eloquent art as you're a master of it and love for your writing which is magnificent, remarkable and mesmerizing
Thank you so much for those words, Vamana! I appreciate you reading my work
This was soul-deep and stirring.
The surrender you speak of feels so familiar — that ache of loving fully while letting go of control. I felt it with every line.
From one writer with a palindrome name (Anna) to another beautiful soul: thank you for this offering.
It landed right where it needed to Cass, as always 🤍
Omgg thank you so much for reading, Anna. Never expected this piece to resonate with the you🖤❤️
this is absolutely incredible!!
Thanks Velvet🫶🫶
both are hauntingly gorgeous. the reverse hit me like a truck
Thanks Avani! I appreciate you taking the time to reflect upon it
It takes skill to write an experimental poem like this and you did it well!
Thank you! I have experimented a lot! Will post more
Wow! That was brilliant. The format is astonishing.
Thank you Stephanie!